Saturday, December 6, 2008

Assignment 8 - Union

..........There were a subway accident at Shindang station at about 10 p.m.. The subways suddenly stopped while coming in and some women screamed and came running. After a while an engineer and many people came out of the subway. Because a person was jammed between a platform and a subway! Someone shouted "Push this train!!" and people started to push. It didn't move at first but it began to joggle little by little with more people. "One, two, three!, one, two, three!' Shouting was continuous and shaking of the train was getting bigger. One man who was pushing the train shouted "Take part in here!!' to other people who looked at this in surprise so, they also helped and this situation was ended. One man who was jammed lost his consciousness and 119 rescue party carried him on a stretcher.

2 comments:

Kim said...

Is this a true story? It's amazing. How did he fall inthere? Did he survive?

TIPS:

1. "There was a ... p.m."

2. "The subway train suddenly stopped as it was coming into the station as a woman screamed and came running."

3. "There was a person jammed between the platorm and the train."

4. "Push the train."

5. "The shouting got louder and the train started to move."

6. ..shouted, "Help us!"

7. ".. the situation was fixed."

8. "The man who was jammed lost consciousness and the 119 rescue party carried him away on a stretcher.

So Jin Yoo said...

Thank you, teacher! i will change these tonight!! Luv U!